Today we started to write the treatment for our film. However, as we are waiting to hear back from the council, this is fairly difficult to do at this moment in time. We have decided that, when we hear back from the council, we can then write our treatment, with our setting and our story permanent. However, we do need to consider if we cannot gain access to any abandoned buildings and what we would do if we cannot.
We also handed in the first draft of our 'Insane' essay. Fortunately I received an A and do not need to redraft my essay. I am pleased with my grade and now feel that my essay writing has improved.
Here is the assessment sheet:
As you can see I was now better at using the key terms to explain my points as I used the S - E - X - Y writing frame. However, I need to work on developing a critical voice when writing my next essay.
No comments:
Post a Comment