Hi Charlie - trailer will be level 4 when you shorten it to 30 secs and take out the edit clicks. You can cut it down to one ring of the phone, cross fade the different sounds so they all blend rather than having pauses and finally I wouldn't have the male voice as the character and the V/O. You could just take out the male character and leave in the V/O.
Great first draft.
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