Here is the second draft of my radio trailer. Taking the feedback I received into account, I came up with a slightly more intense radio trailer. The build up includes crescendos and, therefore, makes the viewer feel slightly more anxious.
I agree with what this critic is saying. The suspense is built up well yet the voice over may need to be slightly slower to build tension. However, I feel that this is difficult to achieve in a thirty-second radio trailer but I will consider re-doing the voice over.
I was also told to make sure the trailer was shortened to 30 seconds exactly and could cut this down by taking out part of the phone ringing to leave it to one ring. I was also told to cross fade the different sounds so they blended together and made the trailer sound more fluent. I will also consider taking out part of the dialogue to help make the trailer shorter.
put final trailer first and label clearly.
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